Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts

Thursday, September 12, 2019

Week 4 Lab: TEDEd Videos on Style

General Notes:

This week I've decided to watch videos on creative writing style. I have noticed that I tend to struggle with style while writing stories for Indian Epics class. I think I struggle because I have been trained to write engineering papers - papers with no usage of pronouns, no colorful language, and with an emphasis on relating theory to experimental results instead of using creativity. I'm usually doing at least one lab report a week, so it is hard for me to switch to a creative style and do well. I hoped that watching these videos would help me learn to write in a more creative style.

Notes from Videos:

The Power of Creative Constraints

  • Creative constraints are needed to help narrow down what to do
    • Imagine trying to invent with no constraints
  • Iterative and innovative creativity both exist
  • Many discoveries are made on accident while researching another topic

What Makes a Hero

  • "The Hero with a Thousand Faces" - book discussing how all heroes are essentially the same character
    • The Hero's Journey
      • Starts in known world and travels through an unknown world
      • Hero's worst fear is then faced
      • Crisis - hero's darkest hour
      • Treasure - after the crisis the hero somehow claims some treasure
      • Result - Monsters bow down or chase out monster
      • Return - Hero returns to his world
      • New Life - Hero is a new person
      • Resolution - All plot lines get straightened out and finished up
  • Believed that we follow this type of plot as it mimics human life

How to Build a Fictional World

  • Rules are made for a fictional world and the story follows these rules
  • Steps to write
    • Set a basic setting
    • Make a timeline
    • What rules exist?
    • What kind of government, what do people believe in?
    • Retransform entire real world into a fictional world

What "Orwellian" Really Means

  • "Orwellian" used to named authoritarianism
    • Really means how deceptive language works

What Makes Something "Kafkaesque"?

  • Unnecessarily complicated processes
  • Characters have circular reasoning that causes problems with work

How to Write Descriptively

  • Must use descriptive language to ensnare someone in your imaginative world
    • Use all five senses to lay out a really good scene
  • Avoid cliches

Beware of Nominalizations

  • Nominalization formed when adding -ity, -ition, or -ism to a noun
  • Nominalizations can obscure the true meaning of a sentence
  • Use verb driven sentences

The Pleasure of Poetic Pattern

  • Repetition should be used as much as possible when writing poetry
  • Instead of repeating same thing over and over again, repeat sounds within a word
  • Assonance - repetition of vowel sounds
  • Consonance - repetition of consonants

Final Thoughts

I got some valuable information from some videos, while others did not help me as much. However, videos such as "Beware of Nominalizations" was all about not doing something I've been trained to do in my engineering and science courses and was important for me to understand that this technique is not useful for creative writing. I thought that "What Makes a Hero" was a very interesting video; I had never thought about how all good hero stories have the same basic structure. 

Image of pen and paper from Flickr

Sources

See this video playlist to find all videos discussed in this post.

Wednesday, September 11, 2019

Reading Notes: PDE Ramayana Part D

Characters

Nala - Monkey son of Vishvakarma
Indrajit - Son of Ravana
Garuda - God of the birds
Kumbhakarna - Giant rakshasa that awakens once every six months to eat humans
Mandodari - first wife of Ravana

Setting

Lanka - designed by Vishvakarma
  • "towering up to pierce the heavens" [1] - Rama's first thoughts of Lanka

Plot

  • Rama was devising a plan to cross to Lanka with all of the monkeys and bears
    • Tried to get god of the oceans to help, but the god was unresponsive
      • After Rama fired arrows into the ocean, the King of the Ocean told Rama to seek Nala
  • Nala decides to build stone bridge to Lanka 
  • Rama and his crew reaches Lanka
    • Ravana had monkey spies with Rama who returned to tell Ravana that he should surrender Sita before Rama gets the chance to attack
    • Ravana brings fake head and bow of Rama to convince Sita that Rama is dead
  • Rama launches his attack on Lanka and Ravana's forces
    • Thousands of vanaras killed and eaten
    • Rama and Lakshmana hit by Indrajit's arrows after Indrajit turns invisible
    • Garuda saves Rama and Lakshmana but does not state why he helped
  • Rama's forces start to beat back the rakshasas
    • Rakshasas awaken Kumbhakarna to attack
      • Kumbhakarna defeats Hanuman but is slain by Rama's fiery arrows
    • Once again Indrajit uses invisibility and this time a Brahma weapon to defeat Rama's forces
      • Hanuman jumps to the Himalayas and brings back mountain top with herbs needed to restore the injured and dead
  • Indrajit attempts to convince Rama that Sita is dead
    • Vibhishana tells Rama that Indrajit is simply using magic and gives Rama a plan to slay Indrajit (at a place named Nikumbhila)
    • Lakshmana slays Indrajit
  • Ravana hears of Indrajit's death
    • Mourns Indrajit's death heavily and decides to kill Sita
    • Rakshasis tell Ravana not to kill Sita as it would make him dishonorable
    • Ravana goes out to the battle 
      • Tries to kill Vibhishana but Lakshmana saves him
      • Ravana throws a dart through Lakshmana's heart
        • Hanuman returns to the Himalayas again to get the herbs to save Lakshmana
  • Rama and Ravana are about to do battle when Indra decides to send Rama his chariot, armor, and sword
    • Vishvakarma made the armor himself
  • Rama and Ravana begin fighting and Rama is attacked first but uses Garuda's weapon to save himself by shooting arrows that turned to birds to eat the snakes Ravana had fired at Rama
    • Rama begins shooting heads of Ravana off, but is unable to weaken Ravana as heads grow back faster than they can be removed
    • Rama slays Ravana by shooting Brahma's weapon given to him by Indra
    • Rakshasas cease fighting as soon as Ravana is slain
    • Vibhishana performs funeral rites and is proclaimed King of Lanka
  • Mandodari mourns Ravana's death and states that she knew Rama would end Ravana
  • Rama gets to see Sita
    • At first both seem very happy to see each other
    • Then Rama says that he can't have Sita back as she was with Ravana for so long and Rama assumed that she had been with Ravana as she was unharmed
      • Sita casts herself into a fire to prove that she has been loyal
      • Gods come to Rama and plead for him to stop
      • Fire announces that Sita is absolutely pure
  • Rama and Sita take a ride back towards Ayodhya and Rama tells the stories of his quest to get her back along the way
  • Rama returns to Ayodhya right at the end of the 14 years
    • He was named ruler as soon as he arrived
  • After a while in Ayodhya, citizens of the kingdom became untrusting of Sita as she had been taken by Ravana
    • Rama exiles Sita for 16 years
    • Sita has Rama's two children - Lava and Kusha
    • Lava and Kusha sing about Rama, Rama eventually learns they are Sita's sons
    • Sita comes to prove her purity and is returned to the earth
  • Lakshmana, Rama, and others decide to ascend to the heavens

Rama and Ravana fight. This picture also shows all of the janara fighting
alongside Rama and Lakshmana. Image from Wikimedia

Bibliography

[1] Myths of the Hindus and Buddhists by Sister Nivedita
[2] Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie

Tuesday, September 10, 2019

Reading Notes: PDE Ramayana Part C

Characters

  • Sugriva - Monkey king sought by Rama
    • Has had his wife and kingdom stolen by his brother, Vila
  • Hanuman - Monkey god that is a devoted follower of Rama
  • Sampati - Vulture, brother of Jatayu
  • Jambavan - leader of the bears
  • Vibhishana - younger brother of Ravana

Setting

  • Kishkindha - Kingdom of Sugriva/Vali
  • Lanka - Ravana's Palace of Gold
  • Mahendra - Mountain range

Plot

  • Hanuman intercepts Rama and Lakshmana as they approach Sugriva's location
  • Sugriva tells story of Vali chasing him out of the kingdom
    • Vali chased a monster down a hole
      • Sugriva saw blood come out so he filled the hole with a mountain
    • Vali actually had slain the monster, returned to Kishkindha and exiled Sugriva
    • Rama gets Sugriva to challenge Vali for the kingdom and his wife
  • Vali's wife, Tara, begs Vali not to fight as she knows that Sugriva has returned with Rama and Lakshmana
    • Vali disregards this warning and decides to fight
    • Vali is initially winning the fight until Rama kills Vali with an arrow
      • All of the vanaras cry because Vali has died, even Sugriva
      • Hanuman comes to Kishkindha
      • All of the vanaras are awed by Rama's strength
  • Sugriva promises to help Rama find Sita, but they must wait for the rainy season to pass
    • Rama cannot enter the city with Sugriva due to his father's wish
    • Rama does not want to wait a month as he is restless
  • At end of rainy season, Sugriva still doesn't have forces together to search for Sita
    • Lakshmana entered Kishkindha to threaten to kill Sugriva if he did not aid Rama as he had promised
      • Immediately Sugriva organizes an army of monkeys and bears to search
  • Varanas cannot find Sita
    • Come across Sampati who tells the Varanas that Sita was taken to Lanka by Ravana
      • Lanka is across the ocean
  • Sampati tells story of him and Vatayu
    • Vatayu and Sampati grew up in a nest in the Himalayas
    • Sampati lost his wings because the sun burned them off
      • Nishakara says that he will regain wings someday, but only at the hands of a noble person
  • Vanaras devising a plan to ensure that Sita really is on Lanka
    • Jambavan reminded Hanuman of his birth and stories of him jumping to try to reach the sun
    • Hanuman was then convinced he could jump to Lanka and did so
    • During his jump, a rakshasi tried to eat Hanuman, but Hanuman killed the Rakshasi and finished his trip to Lanka
  • Hanuman wanders through Lanka to find Sita
    • Finds Ravana sleeping amongst his wives, but Sita is no where to be seen
    • Eventually finds Sita among ashoka trees, surrounded by rakshasis
    • Ravana tells Sita that he will kill and torture her if she does not submit to Ravana
    • Sita crawls to base of tree Hanuman is in
      • Hanuman is able to talk to Sita as she is close 
  • Initially, Sita is worried that Hanuman is actually Ravana taking Hanuman's shape, but Hanuman shows Rama's ring and Sita is assured that Hanuman is who he says he is
    • Hanuman attempts to bring Sita back to Rama, but she refuses to be touched by a man that is not Ravana
    • Sita gave Hanuman jewelry she had in her hair for him to take back
    • Sita tells Hanuman that Ravana plans to kill her within 2 months and asks if Rama will save her and kill Ravana
  • Rakshasas capture Hanuman after a fight
    • Realize Hanuman could not be killed with weapons, they use a Brahma shaft to capture Hanuman
    • Hanuman tied up more after being caught by the Brahma shaft, but other ties release the strength of the Brahma shaft
      • Hanuman remains calm as he wants to talk with Ravana
    • Ravana talks with Hanuman who tells Ravana that he needs to surrender Sita or he will be killed by Rama
      • Ravana is angered and sets Hanuman's tail on fire
        • Hanuman breaks out of the ties and burnt Lanka down after Sita prayed that the fire does not burn Hanuman
        • Hanuman talks with Sita and tells her Rama will return shortly
  • Sugriva organizes his forces to move to Mahendra
    • Need to devise a plan to cross the sea
  • Rakshasas need plan to fend off Rama and his army
    • Vajradanshtra
      • Dress up as Bharat's troops so Rama won't attack then launch an assault of arrows and spears
    • Nikumbha 
      • Will take on Hanuman and Sugriva
  • Vibhishana recommends Ravana return Sita to Rama to avoid destruction of Lanka and death of Ravana
    • Ravana is angered and casts Vibhishana away
      • Vibhishana is angered and decides to join forces with Rama
Hanuman returns to Rama after burning Lanka.
Image from Wikimedia

Sources

Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie